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Thursday, 28 April 2016
We were learning to write narratives in class today. This is my story about a cat that got superpowers.

Once upon a time there was a kitten, a kitten that loved nature. This kitten was named Fluff. Fluff was looking for some food to eat when he found some leftover chicken lying on the walkway. It had something stuck to it but Fluff paid no attention to it.

After Fluff ate that piece of chicken, he realized he was much bigger than before. And when he went back home, Fluff licked his paws to gave himself a wash, but what Fluff didn’t know was that he had armour all over his body. He was surprised. Then he went into the bathroom to look in the mirror, he practised his meowing and all that came out was… "Hi I am Fluff and I am a kitten."

He was amazed by the change in his voice. He went for another walk around town and every person he walked past started staring at him. 
“Meow,” he said. But what actually came out was, "Hello."
Fluff started to realize that he could actually interact with humans. "What is happening to me?"
Fluff asked himself.

As Fluff wondered to himself what would happen next, his eyes turned red. "Aaaagh!" He was shooting laser beams everywhere. So he asked some boys nearby for some spare shades and after he finally got some, Fluff was safe from his newly known powers. Then he heard a kid stuck in a tree crying and wailing. Fluff then started running up to the tree and ... he found he started to fly.
"WHOA," the girl said, "That's so cool. Who are you?"

"Thank you for saving me," said the girl."I have to get back to class."
And Fluff asked the little child where her school was.
“I go to Glen Innes School," said the girl.
Then Fluff suggested he could fly her back. The girl replied, "yes" and when she got back to school, all the students and teachers started saying….
“It’s a bird”
“It’s a plane”
"No!" said Fluff, "I am a cat."
“A supercat”, said the girl.
"Thank you Supercat." all the children shouted.
"You are welcome." said Supercat, "from now on I am making a vow to watch over Glen Innes School."
And that he did. Every time there was trouble, Supercat was always there. And he got to know everyone else at Glen Innes School better.

And that is the story of Glen Innes School’s hero, Supercat.


Kura said...

Hey Jazire, it's me Kura. I really like you work. I just wanted to know what happened to supercat after he saved Glen Innes School. I hope you have a part two. Great work, keep it up.