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Tuesday 18 June 2013

Getting lost!


It was a hot summer morning when Lucy, Jake, Mum, Dad, and Emma were going to the beach because it was hot. When they arrived to the beach Emma, Jake, and Lucy went out of the car and they went for a swim. After swimming they went and got changed. When they were done they came out and went for a little walk on the beach. While they were walking Lucy saw a sign which said, "do not enter," but Emma went in. By the time they got back to the car Emma was gone. Jake sat down and cried. Lucy said, "it’s okay, we can go find her." So they went off to look for Emma.They search everywhere but they just couldn't  find her anywhere. So they came back to Mum and Dad and told them that Emma was lost. Mum and Dad were very disappointed and they all went looking for her.


When they went looking for her they could not find her so they sat down and sang a song. Emma heard it and followed the sound. She made her way out and went and hugged her sister Lucy and said, "thank you for saving me." Everyone was happy, so they all went and celebrated
and they had supper there. When it was time to go Emma sat down on the beach and sang a song when Mum said it was time to go so everyone went. When Dad was driving he sang the song Emma was singing and everyone sang that song and made their way home and never return to this beach ever again.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Camille, I think that your story is great. I liked that you had a great solution. Which Beach do you love going to and why is it your favourite?

Unknown said...

Hi Camille
I really enjoyed reading your story about getting lost. My favourite part of your amazing story is when you wrote down "DO NOT ENTER" What would your reaction be if someone in your family got lost.

Unknown said...

Hey, Camille..
You got a very amazing story.
I like the part how you said that Lucy went back to the car but the car was not there. Well done! Camille
Keep up the good Work!!